I am a Year 6/7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Tevita Thank you for sharing your poem. I like how you slowed your voice down when you were repeating the idea of being calm. Why does anime calm you?
Tena koe Tevita, Its your classmate Ruqayat. I like how you changed the tone of your voice throughout your video. I also like how you put rhymes in your poem. What is your favorite anime?
Kia ora Tevita
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your poem. I like how you slowed your voice down when you were repeating the idea of being calm. Why does anime calm you?
Tena koe Tevita, Its your classmate Ruqayat. I like how you changed the tone of your voice throughout your video. I also like how you put rhymes in your poem. What is your favorite anime?
ReplyDeleteKind regards ¬ Ruqayat