I am a Year 6/7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Tevita I really like you story about the Cicurs in the sky and I like how you wrote a lot and it was good to read your story 😎😎😎😎 GREAT WORK.
Hello Cookie, this is Soloia and Emora. We think your story is amazing and so interesting! Maybe next time you could make a lighter background. Best regards, Soloia and Emora
Hi Tevita I really like you story about the Cicurs in the sky and I like how you wrote a lot and it was good to read your story 😎😎😎😎 GREAT WORK.
ReplyDeleteHello Cookie, this is Soloia and Emora. We think your story is amazing and so interesting! Maybe next time you could make a lighter background.
ReplyDeleteBest regards,
Soloia and Emora
Hey, Tevita this is Joshua and i really like your story. All i want to say is remember to proofread you work
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