I am a Year 6/7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Tevita and Toa. This is an amazing presentation you have made about our country. Maybe next time you should fix your mistakes because we saw some mistakes in your work and maybe just add a bit more words to your work too but your work was interesting to read.
Hi Tevita, this is Nese, Ilaisaane and Emora from your school. We like all the juicy information you put in on NZ. Just a heads up but maybe next time you could reference your work (link the site you got the information from).
Hi Tevita, this is Laisa. You have an amazing presentation about New Zealand. You can maybe put more words.Maybe next time you could change the background in brown,blue,black.
Hi Tevita and Toa. This is an amazing presentation you have made about our country. Maybe next time you should fix your mistakes because we saw some mistakes in your work and maybe just add a bit more words to your work too but your work was interesting to read.
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ReplyDeleteHi Tevita, this is Nese, Ilaisaane and Emora from your school. We like all the juicy information you put in on NZ. Just a heads up but maybe next time you could reference your work (link the site you got the information from).
ReplyDeleteHi Tevita, this is Laisa. You have an amazing presentation about New Zealand. You can maybe put more words.Maybe next time you could change the background in brown,blue,black.
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