I am a Year 6/7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Tevita, I really like how you have presented your information. Such a cool DLO (Digital learning object). Hey Tevita all the information is well researched and you have written it in your words however there are some spelling mistakes like when you are writing about Kate Sheppard - you need to spell the word fair correctly. (you have spelled it like fear). Keep up the awesome sharing on your blog.
Hi Tevita it is me Murray I love your work I like the way you said heroes are ordinary people that risk there life for someone elses life you did a lovely work keep it up and keep on posting.
Hi Tevita this is Karson and I like the information on telling them that heros are ordinary hero because all that info sounds true and convincing
ReplyDeleteThank you for replying back Karson. ( ´･･)ﾉ(._.`)
DeleteHi Tevita,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have presented your information. Such a cool DLO (Digital learning object). Hey Tevita all the information is well researched and you have written it in your words however there are some spelling mistakes like when you are writing about Kate Sheppard - you need to spell the word fair correctly. (you have spelled it like fear).
Keep up the awesome sharing on your blog.
Thx for the feed back Manpreet.
DeleteHi Tevita it is me Murray I love your work I like the way you said heroes are ordinary people that risk there life for someone elses life you did a lovely work keep it up and keep on posting.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feed back.
DeleteIm Rongotai college and I think you work is really good im a year 8.
ReplyDeleteHey thank you for replying back.
DeleteHi Tevita this is Karson,
ReplyDeleteand also the work that you did looks really arranged perferctly.